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two people completely connected
feeling incredible senses
everything else leaves their minds
for that short momemt in time
all you feel is this incredible pleasure
all you want is for this feeling to remain
and it is so hard to contain
so you moan and scream
nothing in the world feels as good
it seems like a dream
as it gets harder and faster
you get to feeling like you are in completely ecstasy
you begin to hear a beat, a melody
you may slow it down and change positions
but all of it is so delicious
bodies become sweaty and moist all over
and dirty wetness is so wonderful
the intensity becomes stronger
it won't last much longer
so you climax
take a deep breath, go outside
smoke a stoge and relax
i was bored in class and wrote a poem about good sex
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:iconunicodragon:
unicodragon Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
;)  Hawt
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:iconkathywolfs:
kathywolfs Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Awesome poem
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yourdailynews Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
wow u should get bored in class more!
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:iconave0316:
ave0316 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
wow this is a awesome poem
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:iconaquashadow11:
aquashadow11 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
This is really good
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:icontwisted-enchantment:
Twisted-Enchantment Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
I love it sooooooooo freaking much
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RivuletPawprint Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very well-written and sensual. It describes the feelings well.
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dashishugarpill22 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Now this is what sex shuold be like
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:iconrachey827:
Rachey827 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
yup. good sex :D
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:iconemma2236:
emma2236 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student Artist
awesome poem
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:icongigiizpoppin:
gigiizpoppin Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
omg i love it ITSZ PERFECT!!!!!!!!!
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:iconsugarbaby27:
Sugarbaby27 Featured By Owner May 30, 2011
ahhh i love it!!! now im thinky ....
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:iconsugarbaby27:
Sugarbaby27 Featured By Owner May 30, 2011
wow lunch dehal XDD
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:icontheicefangs:
theicefangs Featured By Owner May 25, 2011  Student General Artist
this sounds like a paper my good friend wrote about killing someone and getting awaywith it she turned it in tho and got a lunch detention!xD
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:iconsingerkitty13:
Singerkitty13 Featured By Owner May 8, 2011
...now i'm wet.
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:iconchaitea09:
ChaiTea09 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
ahhh, this is goood lol never have done it myself, but you created some good imagery xD
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:iconjessicafinie:
JessicaFinie Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010
>lool great movie like it
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:iconjessicakgowdy:
JessicaKGowdy Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2010  Hobbyist Artist
I love the ending..its all over in a flash! :D Great work!
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anemiainyoursheets Featured By Owner May 17, 2010
love it :D

:heart:
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persephoneisthename Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2010
Great job, really awesome.
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cristalclear13 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010   Writer
appreciate it! :)
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:iconkishskirby:
KishsKirby Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
i wonder if you had your classmates looking over your should and be like what the fuck?
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:iconcristalclear13:
cristalclear13 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009   Writer
hahahah! no im sneaky :)
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:iconkishskirby:
KishsKirby Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009
XDDD that would be funny if it was in lit class:lmao:
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:iconcristalclear13:
cristalclear13 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009   Writer
haha was 5th period English :)
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:iconkishskirby:
KishsKirby Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009
lol!:iconirhappyplz:
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:iconmanfa-jayne:
Manfa-Jayne Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2009
OMFG i absolutely love this poem :) reading it made my toes curl besides the smoking part it is so hot
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cristalclear13 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2009   Writer
hahahha yeah gotta have the smoke after for sure! lol glad u liked :)
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:iconlisawulf:
Lisawulf Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2009
really cool poem ^^
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:iconcristalclear13:
cristalclear13 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2009   Writer
thank ya :)
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:iconlisawulf:
Lisawulf Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2009
you're welcome ^^
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:iconkaibutsukuma:
KaibutsuKuma Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2009  Student General Artist
DAMN THAT SOUNDED HOT
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:iconcristalclear13:
cristalclear13 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2009   Writer
Thanks a lot :)
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:iconurikoneko:
URIKONEKO Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2009
(.)///////(.)

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THAT'S what i have to look foreward to?
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sawariyapraveen Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2008
a sexy sex u have imagined...........wil try that soon [:P]
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:iconcheng-wi:
cheng-wi Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2008   Writer
It was really good!! Unfortunately the sex I've had wasn't good, like what you wrote about. I've never been able to have sex like that........... maybe someday....it'll improve.....but for now I'll have to wait for improvement.
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cristalclear13 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008   Writer
lol sorry to hear that! thanks for the comment. g'luck gettin down n dirty!!
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:iconcheng-wi:
cheng-wi Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2008   Writer
LOL, thank you!! Good luck yourself!!!
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:iconbeta15:
beta15 Featured By Owner May 8, 2008
peac of art (good times(thinking :D)) lol
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2Ah Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2008
Ilove it
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CheekyCzekaj Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2008  Student Filmographer
I love it :D :heart:
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cristalclear13 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2008   Writer
thank you so much. i wrote that SO long ago i dont know how but people still find it all the time on here. appreciate the comment and the fav add! take care!!
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Gerr-Men Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2007   Photographer
check out your work: [link]
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Gerr-Men Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2007   Photographer
Check out your video [link]
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DARKNESS87 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2007
But the smoking is optional right?
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:iconandsoitburns:
andsoitburns Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2003
i think you nailed it...good job
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pulferd Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2003   Traditional Artist
Mwah hahaha! I love the end! You know how to enjoy yourself. I'll remember this one for awhile. Fookin perfect.
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Peace
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