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two people completely connected
feeling incredible senses
everything else leaves their minds
for that short momemt in time
all you feel is this incredible pleasure
all you want is for this feeling to remain
and it is so hard to contain
so you moan and scream
nothing in the world feels as good
it seems like a dream
as it gets harder and faster
you get to feeling like you are in completely ecstasy
you begin to hear a beat, a melody
you may slow it down and change positions
but all of it is so delicious
bodies become sweaty and moist all over
and dirty wetness is so wonderful
the intensity becomes stronger
it won't last much longer
so you climax
take a deep breath, go outside
smoke a stoge and relax
©2003-2009 ~cristalclear13
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Author's Comments

i was bored in class and wrote a poem about good sex

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:iconpulferd:
Mwah hahaha! I love the end! You know how to enjoy yourself. I'll remember this one for awhile. Fookin perfect.
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Peace
:iconandsoitburns:
i think you nailed it...good job

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Mock guilt and welcome hell.
:icondarkness87:
But the smoking is optional right?

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cartoon addict!
:icongerr-men:
check out your work: [link]

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Show me love :heart: I'm screaming for more :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Check out your video [link]

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Show me love :heart: I'm screaming for more :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
:iconchildmagic:
I love it :D :heart:

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~Look with the eyes of a child and you will see magic all around.

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:iconcristalclear13:
thank you so much. i wrote that SO long ago i dont know how but people still find it all the time on here. appreciate the comment and the fav add! take care!!

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"When Luck shuts the door, you've got to come in through the window!"
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peac of art (good times(thinking :D)) lol

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hello :) OMG :D :( :P

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