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two people completely connected
feeling incredible senses
everything else leaves their minds
for that short momemt in time
all you feel is this incredible pleasure
all you want is for this feeling to remain
and it is so hard to contain
so you moan and scream
nothing in the world feels as good
it seems like a dream
as it gets harder and faster
you get to feeling like you are in completely ecstasy
you begin to hear a beat, a melody
you may slow it down and change positions
but all of it is so delicious
bodies become sweaty and moist all over
and dirty wetness is so wonderful
the intensity becomes stronger
it won't last much longer
so you climax
take a deep breath, go outside
smoke a stoge and relax
i was bored in class and wrote a poem about good sex
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:iconkathywolfs:
kathywolfs Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  New member Hobbyist Filmographer
Awesome poem
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yourdailynews Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013
wow u should get bored in class more!
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ave0316 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
wow this is a awesome poem
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aquashadow11 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
This is really good
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Twisted-Enchantment Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
I love it sooooooooo freaking much
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RivuletPawprint Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very well-written and sensual. It describes the feelings well.
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dashishugarpill22 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Now this is what sex shuold be like
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Rachey827 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
yup. good sex :D
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emma2236 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Student Artist
awesome poem
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gigiizpoppin Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2012
omg i love it ITSZ PERFECT!!!!!!!!!
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